检查英语作文是否正确 (next door to the home Zhang Grandpa's bicycl
检查英语作文是否正确 (next door to the home Zhang Grandpa's bicycle is broken ,so XiaoMing off
Xiao Ming got up at twenty to eight,and then he washed his face and brushed his teeth.At the 8 o'clock,he ran in the morning,the air is very fresh and it can be heard that the birds in the trees sang cheerfully.He had breakfast at half past eight,he ate rice and vegetables.Xiao Ming think the vegetables is very good for people bodies,so he ofen eats.At the nine o'clock,(上面）
Xiao Ming got up at twenty to eight,and then he washed his face and brushed his teeth.At the 8 o'clock,he ran in the morning,the air is very fresh and it can be heard that the birds in the trees sang cheerfully.He had breakfast at half past eight,he ate rice and vegetables.Xiao Ming think the vegetables is very good for people bodies,so he ofen eats.At the nine o'clock,(上面）
赞 wyjn5 春芽
共回答了14个问题采纳率：92.9% 举报
(next door to the home Zhang Grandpa's bicycle is broken ,so XiaoMing off)
修改
his next door neighbor,Grandpa Zhang's bicycle was broken,so xiaoming went and had a look at it.
他家隔壁张爷爷的自行车坏了,所以小明去看了看,是这个意思吗?
修改
his next door neighbor,Grandpa Zhang's bicycle was broken,so xiaoming went and had a look at it.
他家隔壁张爷爷的自行车坏了,所以小明去看了看,是这个意思吗?
1年前 追问
6
还是有些地方需要改进。 1 he ran in the morning （he did morning running） 2 the air is very fresh (the air was very fresh) 3 the birds in the trees sang (sing或singing) cheerfully 4 Xiao Ming think（thought） the(去掉) vegetables is（are） very good for people(去掉或加's) bodies(health) 5 Grandoa Zhang Praised XiaoMing(and said he) is(was) a good boy 总体感觉，是汉语直接翻译过去的，不很符合英语的表达习惯，再有就是时态一致性要引起注意 话说的比较直率，请见谅！
可能相似的问题
-
1年前1个回答
-
1年前2个回答
-
1年前2个回答
-
1年前1个回答
你能帮帮他们吗