想向心仪的女孩子写一封英文信,想认识她本人,下面是底稿,谁能帮我修改一下.
想向心仪的女孩子写一封英文信,想认识她本人,下面是底稿,谁能帮我修改一下.
Dear Miss,
I know it's abrupt to sent you a letter,but you always give me an illusion that I have known you for a long time,please forgive me.
I don't know when you walked into my world .Maybe on a friday morning or a sunday night,but i can remember clearly that you eat too much on that day.From that time,I have often asked myself why,why are you so impressive?why are you so charming?I can't forget your shining eyes,your lovable face,your golden hair,your not that slim stature.I know it's not the right time to distract you for you are preparing for the 2013 graduate record examination,so do i.i hope i can see you every day in the library.let work hard for our deams,no matter what the result is,cherish it.best wishes for you.
Best regard,
Bowen.
Dear Miss,
I know it's abrupt to sent you a letter,but you always give me an illusion that I have known you for a long time,please forgive me.
I don't know when you walked into my world .Maybe on a friday morning or a sunday night,but i can remember clearly that you eat too much on that day.From that time,I have often asked myself why,why are you so impressive?why are you so charming?I can't forget your shining eyes,your lovable face,your golden hair,your not that slim stature.I know it's not the right time to distract you for you are preparing for the 2013 graduate record examination,so do i.i hope i can see you every day in the library.let work hard for our deams,no matter what the result is,cherish it.best wishes for you.
Best regard,
Bowen.
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I know that will be a kind of abrupt to send you a letter,but you always give me an illusion that I have known you for a long time,please forgive my unpoliteness.
I didn't know when you walked into my inner world .Perhaps on a friday morning or a sunday evening,However,i can still remember clearly and recall that situation that you ate too much on that day.From that time,I often asked the reasons towards myself ,why are you so impressive?why are you so charming?I can't forget your shining eyes,your lovable face,your golden hair,your slim stature.I know it's not the right time to distract you for you are preparing for the 2013 graduate record examination,so do i.i hope i can see you every day in the library.let's work hard for our deams,no matter what
the result is,i will cherish it.and what is best wishes always belongs to you.
Best regards,
Bowen.
我修改了一些比较minor的语法
基本意思没有改掉
anyway
perseverance on whether ur study or love pursuing!
I didn't know when you walked into my inner world .Perhaps on a friday morning or a sunday evening,However,i can still remember clearly and recall that situation that you ate too much on that day.From that time,I often asked the reasons towards myself ,why are you so impressive?why are you so charming?I can't forget your shining eyes,your lovable face,your golden hair,your slim stature.I know it's not the right time to distract you for you are preparing for the 2013 graduate record examination,so do i.i hope i can see you every day in the library.let's work hard for our deams,no matter what
the result is,i will cherish it.and what is best wishes always belongs to you.
Best regards,
Bowen.
我修改了一些比较minor的语法
基本意思没有改掉
anyway
perseverance on whether ur study or love pursuing!
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