風淡雲輕
幼苗
共回答了15个问题采纳率:86.7% 举报
1.After graduation from high school,I plan to do several things.
错(graduation改为graduated)
2.Being an active participant is the key of your success.
对
3.We tend to get caught in everyday business and concerns.
对
4.You have never do a day's work in your lives!
错(lives改为live)
5.I began to look upon myself from a different perspective.
错( look upon改为look at)
6.I always glad to buy crop like this.
错(I 后面加am)
7.College is a big difference with high schol.
错(is 改为has)
8.You will never possess it unless you dig up it.
错(dig up it改为dig it up)
9.I plan to make history in my family by being the first to get a college education.
错(后面的a 去掉)
10."This is the finest crop I have yet seen",said the merchant.
错(yet改为ever)
11.As a good student,you will not necessarily study more than a poor student.
错(more改为harder)
12.Learn to keep your attention focus on the task at hand.
错(focus改为focusing)
13.I spent too much time making friends
对
14.I set up a routine that was really my own.
错(后面my own前面加by)
15.I knew that I would able to handle what was ahead.
错(would 后面加be)
16.Without any delay,they set to work to dig for the treaure.
对
17.I soon learned that my life was now up for me.
对
18.True education is a process of expand your capabilities.
错(expand改为expanding)
19.This is the treasure we have been digging for all year.
错(all year改为the whole year)
20.A college education would allow me to acquire these abilities.
对
21.Learning takes more than just going to class and doing homework.
错(going 和doing改为go 和do)
22.I had to regulate the time I spent to study.
对
23.What did life have on store for me?
错(on store 改为stored)
23.Shortly,however,I had my life under control.
对
24.At first,life was a bit difficult.
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