给英语老师提些教学意见（如教课文时、学单词时）用英文100~200词（初二水平）不会可以中英结合

dear teacher:
I am just writing to say thank you.thank you for teaching us things we need to learn, thank you for being there for us when we have any problems, thanks for your devotion and willingness to help us, thank you for the love you've shown to us.
I am lucky to have a teacher like you. and no matter what kind of person i will become, you will always have your influence on me. You taught me how to study, how to live and even how to be a man. From you I learned what kind of person i want to be and what should i get from life. this means everything to me.
my dear teacher, no matter what you will always have a special place in my heart and i will remember what i have learned from you and carry the knowleges through my life! 行不行
Respectful Miss/Mr xx,
Here is a letter from your student-xxx to ask for your help with my english study.I feel it really hard to remember the english words so that i wonder if you could tell me some better ways in bearing words quickly in mind?I have already tried the one you taught us which is "reading words for 7 times will keep them in mind quickly",but i think it may not be a useful method to me.So i do need your help.May I ?
regards
class x ,grade x
xxx 现在呢