麻烦你们帮我看一下这道英语 改错题； when traveling ,l take the following thin

When traveling,I (1/take) the following things,which (2/is) my camera,a compass and some clothes.I think the ID card is used (3/to taking) pictures or record that we want.After we return home and take out pictures or recordings,(4/so) they can bring us a lot (5/-) funs.The compass is very essential (6/of) us to travel in the forests.Without them,we may get lost.And CD player is (7/either) very important for (8/of) to kill time when on the train or (9/the) plane.Besides,I (10/had) to bring one or two coats when traveling to different places
共有10处的错误（已用括号标出）.
　　1.take 前加will
　　2.which指代复数名词things,把is改为are
　　3.或者把to改为for,即is used for taking；或者把taking 改为take,即is used to take
　　4.after 引导的是状语从句,删去so把后面的句子变成主句
　　5.不能说a lot funs,改为a lot of funs
　　6.把of 改为for,即The compass is very essential for us to travel
　　7.either用在否定句的句尾,此处是肯定句,改为also
　　8.与第三处错误大体相同,把for 后的of 改为us
　　9.train 和 plane 是介词的并列宾语,只需要一个冠词,删去plane 前的the
　　10.全文都是现在时态,此处也应该如此,把had 改为 have

when traveling ,l take the following things ,which is my camera,a compass and some clothes .
我感觉这个句子存在以下问题，第一如果用定语从句，那么thing做先行词，引导词用that，但是that不引导非限定性定语从句，所以又只能用which，但是which没见过与thing连用的。另外后面的显然不...

is-are
taking-take
that-what
so去掉
a lot （of ）fun
funs-fun
of-for
them-it
the CD player
either-also
of？你打错了吧没打错就改us
had-have
不是十分确定，挺难的改错

可能错误有点多，不介意的话我直接按你的意思写一遍好了
while i am traveling,i will take the following things,my camera, a compass and some colthes.I think the camera is used to take pictures and record what we want.When we ...

is-are clothes-clothe taking-take that-what so-/ funs-fun of-for(或to吧 不确定) them-it either-also
(ID card-camera ?)

when traveling ,l take the following things ,which is（are） my camera,a compass and some clothes .l think the ID card is used to taking(take) pictures or record that(what) we want .after we return home...