草木芯川
幼苗
共回答了24个问题采纳率:95.8% 举报
1.I went to the Great Wall,and I was very excited to see it.原句缺少一个连接词,应是一个并列句.
2.I fell in love with it at once as soon as I went to the city.语感上觉得love说不通,是持续性动词.用fall in love强调瞬时动作.
3.I didn't like the weather there.there不能放名词前作定语,应后置.
1年前
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