English,请帮我看看我的表达有那里需要修改的地方.
English,请帮我看看我的表达有那里需要修改的地方.
Dear samuel
Last week I sent a email to you.but I dont receive you relpy until now,please kinkly let me know how could I help you to increase your business.the attachment is some product about our factory,please refer it.I anticipate you soonest response.
上个星期我发一封邮件给老外,他没回我,然后我发了以上的邮件.