English,请帮我看看我的表达有那里需要修改的地方.

English,请帮我看看我的表达有那里需要修改的地方.
Dear samuel
Last week I sent a email to you.but I dont receive you relpy until now,please kinkly let me know how could I help you to increase your business.the attachment is some product about our factory,please refer it.I anticipate you soonest response.
上个星期我发一封邮件给老外,他没回我,然后我发了以上的邮件.
寒影风 1年前 已收到4个回答 举报

王八糕子 幼苗

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Dear samuel
Last week I sent an email to you.But I haven't received any relpy till now.Please let me know what I can do to help you with your business.The attachment is some product by our factory.Please check it.I am looking forward to your early response.
主要大小写,用自己熟悉能驾驭的词句,不要用电子词典查出的根据汉义乱凑合.外国人也用很简单的语言.

1年前

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张无忌之xx 幼苗

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全是中文式的英语。。。。。。

1年前

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datt200 幼苗

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Last week I sent an email to you.but I haven't received your relpy. Please kindy let me know how could I help you to increase your business. The attached products about our factory,please check.
Looking forward to your reply!
Best regards.

1年前

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piaorongxin 幼苗

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这个是用GOOGLE翻译的吗?那个不太准的。能把您想要翻译的中文告诉我吗?我看看能不能帮您。上个星期我发了邮件给你,但到现在为止,我还没收到你的回复,请告诉我,我可以怎样为你生意的增加提出帮助。附件是我们工厂的一些产品资料,请查收,期望你的回复。Dear Samuel, How is everything going? There hasn't been any reply since I se...

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