请帮我看看我的英语 广告是否有问题?

请帮我看看我的英语 广告是否有问题?
NEED AN ENGLISH TEACHER
Hello,overseas!Can You Speak English?
I'm looking for an English speaking student as a teacher to help me practicing my spoken English for the TOEFL test witch I'll take next year.
You will get well paid.We can get together to negotiate for a fair price.
Additionally,we can make good friends.I can tell you anything you want to know about China.
I'm looking forward to your calling.
Tel:XXXXXXXXXXX
My Name:Burgess Chen