帮忙看看我的英语作文有什么错Mei Fang has been to an amusement park in Guan

帮忙看看我的英语作文有什么错
Mei Fang has been to an amusement park in Guangzhou.She did not enjoy it because she likes Disneyland better.In Disneyland,there is Mickey Mouse,Donald Duck and other famous Disneyland characters.And they walk around Disneyland all the time.It is so interesting to see.Though in the amusement park have rollar coaster,and she could also boating,climbing,flying kites and so on.The amusement park is really not as funny as Disneyland.So,she hope that she can go to Disneyland next time.