求英语作文改错(3小时以内）To be a popular student.We should be epuipped

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In order to be a popular student and make more friends,we should be epuipped with the following abilities,personalities and characteristics.First of all,we should be willing to help others when they encounter some difficult problems.It means that we should be friendly and close to other people so that everyone wants to make friends with us.Secondly,we should take part in school activities and show ourselves to let everyone know about us.Then we will be sunny and bright in their hearts.Besides,as a student,we should behave ourselves and study hard in school.Above all,we must be helpful and believe in ourselves in the way that we can make everyone convinced.As a result,it makes sure that we will become popular students and everyone wants to learn from us.

Above all,you must be convenience. convenience改为convenient
Then we should always take part in some school activities and show yourself.yourself改为ourself
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这是什么水平的 一个看不懂啊

告诉你汉语，你自己看吧：
是一个受欢迎的学生。我们应该与下面的品质成。首先,我们应该愿意帮助别人,当他们遇到一些困难的问题。它意味着你友好和接近他们。和每个人都想要和你做朋友。然后我们应该参加一些学校活动和展示自己。这让每个人都知道你。你将会在他们心中阳光灿烂。此外,作为一名学生,你应该注意自己的言行并在学校努力学习。首先,你必须有限公司...