英语语法I want to be a psychologist doctor when I grow up.Becous

英语语法
I want to be a psychologist doctor when I grow up.Becouse psychologist doctors can help others to live better.Help others can make me happy.First,I have to study better.And then pass a good high school,like Wenzhou Middle School,and a good university,like Zhejiang University.Then,effort study psychology.I want to learn knowledge and ancestral doctor license.Then,I can open a private clinic.After that,I can begin to help others.My dream is finishing.这一段话有语法错误么