请帮忙修改一下英语作文My tripLast summer I went to Xi’an with my friend
请帮忙修改一下英语作文
My trip
Last summer I went to Xi’an with my friends,We went there by plane.I can’t believe it only took me 12 hours to get there.We stayed there for five days.On Monday,we visited some famous places.On Tuesday ,we took a lot of photos.On Wednesday,we went shopping.On Thursday,we ate local food in the restaurant.On Friday,We went to the Xi’an park.We had a good time.
My trip
Last summer I went to Xi’an with my friends,We went there by plane.I can’t believe it only took me 12 hours to get there.We stayed there for five days.On Monday,we visited some famous places.On Tuesday ,we took a lot of photos.On Wednesday,we went shopping.On Thursday,we ate local food in the restaurant.On Friday,We went to the Xi’an park.We had a good time.
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famous places改成 places of interests 名胜的意思
shopping后面加上and we bought some tourist souvenirs (我们买了一些旅游纪念品
On Thursday,we ate local food in the restaurant改成We ate local food in the restaurant on Thursday.再加上it was delicious.
We went to the Xi’an park后面加上It was beautiful.And we all have fun playing there(并且我们都在那儿玩得很高兴)
shopping后面加上and we bought some tourist souvenirs (我们买了一些旅游纪念品
On Thursday,we ate local food in the restaurant改成We ate local food in the restaurant on Thursday.再加上it was delicious.
We went to the Xi’an park后面加上It was beautiful.And we all have fun playing there(并且我们都在那儿玩得很高兴)
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