自己写的英文诗,求改进建议,Rainbow A rainbow arches the
自己写的英文诗,求改进建议,Rainbow A rainbow arches the blu
自己写的英文诗,求改进建议,
Rainbow
A rainbow arches the blue sky,
I cannot touch it however hard I try,
Fast as I run,loud as I cry,
It's in vain,though I jump high.
Rainbows appear after the rain,
Rainbows vanish as you've seen,
Don't be down coz it's not an illusion,
Then,farewell,we shall meet again.
自己写的英文诗,求改进建议,
Rainbow
A rainbow arches the blue sky,
I cannot touch it however hard I try,
Fast as I run,loud as I cry,
It's in vain,though I jump high.
Rainbows appear after the rain,
Rainbows vanish as you've seen,
Don't be down coz it's not an illusion,
Then,farewell,we shall meet again.
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A rainbow arches over the blue sky,I cannot touch it however hard I try,Fast as I run,loudly as I cry,It's in vain,though I jump high.Rainbows appear after the rain,Rainbows vanish as you've seen,Don't be down coz it's not an illusion,Then,farewell,we shall meet again.
诗很好,有些小问题已经改在里面了 另外as那两句时态有些问题 还需要斟酌
诗很好,有些小问题已经改在里面了 另外as那两句时态有些问题 还需要斟酌
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你能帮帮他们吗