谁能帮我写一首英文诗?急用!那位英文高手可以帮我写一个英文诗~急用写得好我会追加分的~fifteen这是我们班同学写的:

谁能帮我写一首英文诗?急用!
那位英文高手可以帮我写一个英文诗~急用
写得好我会追加分的~
fifteen
这是我们班同学写的:就是照这个格式,每一段的结尾要加一个“I was fifteen~
Desolated hill in the countryside
Adventure that I really want
I follow the road with my friends
On the way,laughing,playing,charting
We arrived to the hill side when
The sun is still high.I was fifteen
Varity of flowers,trees,
Different calls of birds singing
Fresh air cleans our mind
We smelled the scent
We charged up the hill
Gleaning of the sun filtered
through the dense leaves on the tree interesting and mysterious
I was fifteen
I found a cute brown squirrel,holding a chestnut,standing there
I tires to a approach that cute creature
Closer and closer,it runs away,
Followed and followed.
Dark now and I lost my way.
Terrible dark; huge trees; and lone me.
I was fifteen.
Flowers reveal cunning smiles,trees with their evil hand trying to keep me here
The strange noises come from the darkness
Screaming,screaming.No answer.
Running,running .no people.
I Lost my away just because I follow a small devil.
I was fifteen.
I was crying ,living alone in the dark.I was fifteen.
xiaobao50 1年前 已收到3个回答 举报

hfl122 幼苗

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我在国外上学,可以给你几点建议:
英文里所有的诗都会用到压韵(句尾,句中,句首),暗语(明喻,暗喻),对比...等修饰手法,活用他们,把他们穿插在诗中.
你那同学不会写诗,那是”儿歌”语法.
给你开个头吧:
My fifteen at that spring
the one who always dreaming
childlish me,in a endless lovely time

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i was fifth
everyone was fifth
but who is still fifth now,
the ones i played with
you see,
fifth
that's fifth
everyone was
but now one is
that's it
i was fifth...

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