我想请求帮忙改改这篇英文信Dear Daniel Adams Thank you for your letter .fr

我想请求帮忙改改这篇英文信
Dear Daniel Adams Thank you for your letter .from your letter that I know you want to learn about Chinese high schools .ok .let me tell you something .on the first day .all students should attend assembly .and the headmaster told us many school rules .than I get up at 6.30.a.m.before 7.30.get to school.and ends is 5.30.p.m.We should morning reading everyday .we are relaxed at lunchtime .we can eat lots of Chinese food .of course .we have many activities .for example spring.study English literature.etc that’s all I hope the letter soon pass to you Best wish
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笔者的语法稍微欠缺,主语经常变换,让人有些迷糊.另外有一些语法错误.请参考一下我的修改,希望有所帮助:Dear Daniel Adams,Thanks for your letter,from which you showed great interest in Chinese High Schools,s...

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