英语日记帮我看看,修改一下‘‘谢谢了‘‘‘‘Today when I got up have 7a.m.the sun

Today,(此处加个逗号) when I got up, (have---> it was) 7a.m.(此处你想强调,你起来时就已7点了对吧,所以用it was, 如果用at, 就表示你已经计划好在7点起来)the Sun (have--->had)(run--->risen) up already.此处是现在完成时 it (is-->was) (to-->too) hot to (I去掉) (go running-->run).(I'm-->I was) very angry.I must correct the shortcoming and (cann't-->can't like) that all the time(意思是我不能一直那样).(how to do tomorrow?-->How should I do tomorrow?)意思是我明天要怎样做.I don't know. but句子开头第一字母要大写,自己改 today's work must (today is over-->be done today.)意思是今天的作业必须今天做.(in the sun,Igo running.-->So I ran in the Sun)Sun是特有名词,记得什么时候都在大写S哦.

把have 换成 it was
把run 换成 risen
it too hot for me to do ex
i was
today'work must be finish today

Today when I got up have 7a.m改成Today when I got up at 7a.m
the sun have run up 改成the sun have risen up
it is to hot to I go running改成it is too hot to have a morning run for me
must corre...

Today when I got up at 7a.m. the sun had risen up
already.It was too hot to run.I was very angry.I must correct the shortcomings and can't wait all the time.What should I do tomorrow?I didn't know.But I can't put off till tomorrow what should be done today,then I ran in the sun.