英语自我介绍作文,求指出错误Hello.My name is .After a battle which lasted

英语自我介绍作文,求指出错误
Hello.My name is .After a battle which lasted three years.I graduated from NO.1 Middle School and I m starting a new chapter here now.
I m an out going person.people can easily communicate with me and I love making friends.Also I m delight to lend a hand when you need help.
I have a lot of hobbies.But personally,I do like to play video games best.The school work was under pressure when I was in middle school.And play video games during the right time could make me relax
During the middle school I ve been very found of English ever since.I m enjoy watching all sorts of foreign TV series.I think it would be helpful for me to learn English better.
Have faith and goal for good.That s my key to the problems.The course in high school might be even harder,but I believe I m capable to handle them.As the saying goes:Where there is a will,there s a way.
Thanks for your attention.
wqy4601 1年前 已收到3个回答 举报

hyyangwen 幼苗

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把 a battle which lasted 删去 ,chapter 改成 life ,lend 改成 give ,把 The school work 改成 I ,play改成 playing ,During the middle school I ve been very found of English ever since 这句话我没明白你想表达啥意思,enjoy 改成 enjoying

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松十三 幼苗

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第一段 lasted for ;
第二段 I like to make friends and talk with others
第三段 school work is heavy, and play vadio games during......去掉and,play---playing
could relax me
第四段 during...

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kitty671 幼苗

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Hello.My name is .After a battle which lasted three years(1、标点符号,改为,)I graduated from NO.1 Middle School and I' m starting a new chapter here now.
I'm an outgoing person,so people can communi...

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