In the second aspects,the self-confidence is more importance

In the second aspects,the self-confidence is more importance for the person.
我写的作文结束的一段,The way to success.求指点语法错误.
In the second aspects,the self-confidence is more importance for the person.Someone who has enough self-condidence will also has more power to attain the target.
So get full preparation and self-confidence before you put your hand to task.
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cefeze 幼苗

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语法略有错误,丰富用词并言简意赅一些更好.
Secondly,compared with preparation,confidence plays a more important role in success.The one who is confident enough will likely to attain his target with the power.
Thus,sufficient preparation and confidence are essential before you set out to do your task.

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你写得真好, 跟书上的文章一样,看了就舒服. 我慢慢来, 你能指出我写的语法错误在哪里吗? 我目前先做到不犯语法错误,再学习写得漂亮.

迷离↗夜色 幼苗

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In the second aspect, the self-confidence is more importance for a person.
第一个是单数,第二个用a代表泛指,或者改为for people更好

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