下面的英语作文有没有错误.Yang Yang was born in He Nan Province in 1978 O
下面的英语作文有没有错误.
Yang Yang was born in He Nan Province in 1978 October .Reading in the eleventh middle school of Zhengzhou City. The army in august 1997,and later entered the Aviation University of Air Force in Changchun.In may 2010,was selected as an astronaut.Yang Yang was sent into space on June 16th by China’s Shenzhou 九 spacecraft.
All of the Chinese are proud of our first spacewoman---Yang Yang .
Yang Yang was born in He Nan Province in 1978 October .Reading in the eleventh middle school of Zhengzhou City. The army in august 1997,and later entered the Aviation University of Air Force in Changchun.In may 2010,was selected as an astronaut.Yang Yang was sent into space on June 16th by China’s Shenzhou 九 spacecraft.
All of the Chinese are proud of our first spacewoman---Yang Yang .
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中间的几个Yang Yang最好省略为Yang
神舟九号那里为什么会出现中文
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Yang Yang was born in He Nan Province in October，1978 .Reading in the eleventh middle school of Zhengzhou City.She joined the army in August 1997, and later entered the Aviation University of Air Force in Changchun. In may 2010, Yang was selected as an astronaut。Yang Yang was sent into space on June 16th by China’s Shenzhou 9 Spacecraft。 All of the Chinese are proud of our first spacewoman---Yang Yang
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