这段英语有没语病when you cooperate with someone who are you like,you

when you cooperate with someone who you like,you will feal very good and share happiness and sorrow with each other.And when cooperating with some one who are not very good,you should learn how to put up with him and try to find his advantages .
这样语病改好了,语义更通顺了.

with someone who are you like
错误 去掉are
will fell much better
应该是feel
when coopeared
去掉d
some one who are not very
应该是someone