雅思G类小作文求修改 大概多少分

雅思G类小作文求修改 大概多少分
You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend.In your letter
1.explain why you have moved 2.describe the new house 3.invite your friend to come and visit
Dear James,
We haven't met each other for 3 months,and I miss you so much.How are you doing?I would love to tell you that I have moved to a new house.It's very closed to my school and cheaper than the last one,so I bought it without doubt.What do you think?
The new house gets two rooms and a toilet.It's small,but very comfortable.There is a garden behind the house.I got some flowers in the bedroom to make it lively.It's very bright because there is a window in every room.The sunshine could get though and make the house very warm.
I'd like to invite you to come along.Maybe we could have a party with other friends,and we can have a lot of fun.You can call me before you want to visit.
Lots of love,
Tom