一篇英语小作文.求修改Well,I live in xx in xx Province,which is a beaut

一篇英语小作文.求修改
Well,I live in xx in xx Province,which is a beautiful city located in northeast China.I suppose if I had to describe my hometown,the first thing I would say is its Snow Festival.In winter,many people from all over the world come here to enjoy their winter vacation.They can go skiing and skating,and they can also enjoy my hometown cuisines.The locals are friendly and warm-hearted to visitors,which makes so many visitors feel at home.Another significant characteristic is that it offers example of both classical and contemporary architecture.