概二英语难题改错 一共有五处错误On Thursday I will have to decide what I wan

概二英语难题
改错 一共有五处错误
On Thursday I will have to decide what I want to do over a weekend.I am thinking of mading the trip to London,and visit the British Museum and some parks.But I have spent most of my money,so i cannot even go out of town.I may go to o film,or a concert.Yes,a concert can be very excited.You can watch your stars while enjoying your favorite music.So then,a concert cost so much.I may just listen to music.I have some records given to me as birthday gifts.If I lishen to my own records,there are no need to spend money.All right.That's what I'm going to do
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我看到的错误有:
1.making the trip to London 不知道文中的mading是不是笔误
2.visit 改为visiting 跟前面的making并列的成分,所以要一致
3.excited应改为exciting,前者表示兴奋的,一般指人,后者意思是使人兴奋的,用来形容事物
4.so then改为but then,是然而的意思
5.cost应改为costs,一般现在时中单数第三人称的用法
6.最后的there are no need 改为 there is no need~

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