一道高一英语短文改错题,共有十处错误 急………………

Good afternoon , everyone!
I'm pleased to share my experience of learning English with you .
It is known to all THAT vocabulary is an important part of language learning .
I usually memorize 20 new words a day and put THEM to use whenever possible.
After class , I often listen TO English programs on TV and on the radio.
However , I've learned a lot of (OF不要)from the Internet . Now , I'd like to offer
some ADVICE on English learning . Firstly , we should spend some time
READING interesting English books and magazines . Secondly , I suggest we
(SHOULD) HOLD more English activities . Thirdly , we should TALK in English as
often as POSSIBLE . I'm sure we'll MAKE great progress with these methods.
That's all . Thank you for listening,

1。我觉得I often listen English programs on TV and on the radio。 这一句话有问题。 逻辑思维不服。
2。把那个However，改成and。 3。advice是不可数名词，把那个s去掉就是。 4。把read后面加上Ing。 因为spend time （in）doing sth。