请帮我改下这篇英语自我介绍,使它更口语化,有好的建议也可以写进去!

请帮我改下这篇英语自我介绍,使它更口语化,有好的建议也可以写进去!
总之,使它变得更好就成了,小弟在此谢过了!(用于考研复试)
Good morning professors,
Well,first,I’ll make a simple self-introduction.My name is wang ,coming from the fosan University.As to fosan,it is famous for ceramic(陶瓷) industry,and it is the hometown of huang feihong,a household name thronghout China because of his Chinese gonghu.fanshan is a beautiful city,and it has a long history,I am from a poor mountainous towm of Sichuan province,therefor ,I made up my mind to go out to make a big business ,when I was a child.
In my spare time,I like reading ,especially biographies (bai'ɔɡrəfi)of famous people .These kind of books can teach me how to be a reasonable person and a winner in life .I like listening to music as it can make me comfortable and calm down to think something over .My favorite sports is basketball ,although I am very thin .I think a basketball match is like the life .No one knows who will win until it ends.
Generally speaking ,I am a diligent student especially when doing the things that I like.I am interested in Civil Engineering ,so I will try my best to do it.With this interest,I entered Foshan University to study Civil Engineering .During my four-year education,I have learnt some principles['prinsəpl] and knowledge of my major and want to make further investigation on them.So I have decided to pursue a further study in Geotechnical Engineering.And Middle and Southern University is one of the most famous university in Civil Engineering.I love the feeling in this university.It is full of youthful spirit.And I am deeply attracted by the academic atmosphere.So I long for becoming a student here and I am looking forward to having myself improved after 3 years study here.
This is my first time come to Central South University,but actually,I have hoped for that in my heart more than four years .And now,I’m coming here,I’m coming here to continues to pursue my dream.Hope fellow dear teachers healthy,and also my dream will come true!
That’s all.Thank you!