有没有英语高手,帮忙看看有没有错,
有没有英语高手,帮忙看看有没有错,
My family
I have a happy family .My family has four members,including my father,mother and brother.
When l was a kid ,in order to support the family,my father always goes to many big cities to find some jobs.Gradually,my father began their own business,and he succeeded .
My mother doesn't work,she is a housewife.She given supportive to father.She always nagging me.she had a sharp tongue but a soft heart.
My brother is five years younger than me.He is a very mischievous boy.I believe that he will grow up.
I want to say,Thank you for all you have done for us.
My family
I have a happy family .My family has four members,including my father,mother and brother.
When l was a kid ,in order to support the family,my father always goes to many big cities to find some jobs.Gradually,my father began their own business,and he succeeded .
My mother doesn't work,she is a housewife.She given supportive to father.She always nagging me.she had a sharp tongue but a soft heart.
My brother is five years younger than me.He is a very mischievous boy.I believe that he will grow up.
I want to say,Thank you for all you have done for us.
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My family has four members,变成 There are four people in my family,更地道
my father always goes to 变成my father always went to 时态
to find some jobs变成to find jobs更地道
my father began their own business变成my father began his own business
She given supportive to father.变成 She supports my father.语句少动词
She always nagging me.变成She always nags.
she had a sharp tongue but a soft heart.变成has
I believe that he will grow up.变成 I believe that he will be sensible.
I want to say,Thank you for all you have done for us.这句问题最大,for us?家庭成员对你的好还是家中的某人对其他人的好?
假定你想表达的是前者I would like to thank all that you have done for me.
my father always goes to 变成my father always went to 时态
to find some jobs变成to find jobs更地道
my father began their own business变成my father began his own business
She given supportive to father.变成 She supports my father.语句少动词
She always nagging me.变成She always nags.
she had a sharp tongue but a soft heart.变成has
I believe that he will grow up.变成 I believe that he will be sensible.
I want to say,Thank you for all you have done for us.这句问题最大,for us?家庭成员对你的好还是家中的某人对其他人的好?
假定你想表达的是前者I would like to thank all that you have done for me.
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