【急】我是一名初一学生,这是我写的第一篇英语作文,求批改（不要太长）谢谢!
【急】我是一名初一学生,这是我写的第一篇英语作文,求批改（不要太长）谢谢!
My family
I have a happy family.
There are four people in my family.My mother,father,brother and me.
I love my mother.She is very beautiful.She can will do very delicious meal.She love me too.
My father is very strict .And I have a brother .He is twenty-two years old .But he likes playing computer games.In any day,I can see he playing computer game.I think this is very ridiculous.
I am a student.I am Student at the number one middle school.
I love my family.
My family
I have a happy family.
There are four people in my family.My mother,father,brother and me.
I love my mother.She is very beautiful.She can will do very delicious meal.She love me too.
My father is very strict .And I have a brother .He is twenty-two years old .But he likes playing computer games.In any day,I can see he playing computer game.I think this is very ridiculous.
I am a student.I am Student at the number one middle school.
I love my family.
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