英语翻译我最喜欢的动物是考拉熊,它们很友好 [friendly] 和可爱.它每天的生活都很幸福[快乐也行],一天中,它有

楼上写得挺好的,只是in one day那句, sleeping, wondering 和eating词的tense错了导致句子意思也错了.还有就是开头,如果是交给老师的作业,建议不要加"I am a koala freak!"
My favorite animal is Koala Bear. They are friendly and cute.
Their daily life is very happy. In the day, they spend twenty hours sleeping, two hours in the daze, and two hours eating!
Hope that one day, I can go to Australia and play with koala bears.
如果要展开写：
My favorite animal is Koala bear. Koalas are friendly and cute.
They have large ears and long limbs.
They also have large claws, used to help them climb up the trees.
Their daily life is very happy. In the day, they spend twenty hours sleeping, two hours in the daze, and two hours eating!
I've always wanted one Koala for my pet, but I know it's impossible, so I'm hoping that one day, I can go to Australia, and play with koala bears.