Darling,please tell me,you miss me just like how I miss you.

Sometimes I feel you are like a dream,beautiful,but not real...Want to get closer to you,get to know you more...But I'm lacking of time.
这一段语句混乱,逻辑主语不清
推荐翻译:Darling,please tell me,that you miss me,just like the way I do.
Sometimes,you are like a dream to me,which is so beautiful,though unreal.
I want to be closer with you,to know you more,but I can`t for lack of time.
最后一句 I'm lacking of time不能这样用,lack 作名词时可加of time作为一个短语,但做不及物动词时不能加of,而应用in,如I`m lacking in time.或直接做及物动词,加宾语,如I lack time.

Darling, please tell me，you miss me just like the way I miss you.Sometimes I feel you like a dream, and beautiful, unreal... I Want to get closer to you, get to know you more...But I'm out of time.

亲爱的，请对我说你想我，就像我想你那样。有时候我觉得你就像是一个梦，美丽，但不真实...我想要离你更近，更多地了解你...但是我没有时间。

亲爱的，请告诉我，你也想念我，就像我那么想念你一样。有时候我感觉你就像一个梦，美丽，而不真实。我想靠近你，更多了解你……但是我时间不多了。
这样翻译好些吧：
Darling , please tell me ,you miss me just like how I miss you .Sometimes I feel that you like a dream ,beautiful...

亲爱的，请告诉我，想念我，就像我多么想念你。有时我觉得你像一个梦，美丽的，但不是真实的...想要接近你，了解你更多...但是我没有时间。
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Darling, please tell me that you miss me just like how I miss you. Sometimes I feel you are like a dream, beautiful but not real. I Want to get closer to you, get to know you more...But I don't have enough time.
底下翻译的很好了。