请帮我查下里面的语法错误和Chinglish.

请帮我查下里面的语法错误和Chinglish.
A:
You have a strong personality,do things adventurous.
Suggestion:You can ask elders or teachers when you faced with difficulties!
Suitable Occupation:police,coach,writer x0bB:x0bA man of insight.You can discriminate between what is right and what is wrong
Suggestion:Never cudgel your brains when you are unhappy.Try to find a friend and go shopping!
Suitable Occupation :cartoonist,accountant,director,designer
C:
You are blunt and not bother about trifles.Although you have a rough time on your way,it can always in the right direction
Suggestion:observe the world carefully; there may be a surprising discovery.Suitable career:leader,lawyer,command D:
D:
Your attitude toward life is very frank
Suggestion:set some intermediate targets.
Suitable career:Doctor,teacher,singer,journalist and worker.
E:
You are always depending on your family and friends.
Suggestion:to be independent,you will feel a different world
Suitable Occupation:actor,driver,businessman
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A:
应该用从句连接 You have a strong personality that let you do adventurous things.
时态错误when you are facing with difficulties!
B:
discriminate有歧视的意思,会造成误解 You can distinguish right and wrong 用between是chinglish
C:
it can错误,逻辑主语不一致,改为 you are always
D:
life attitude一般只有positive 和negtive,用frank 不大合适
E:
没必要用进行时,改为you always depend on
By being independent,you will feel a different world

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