英语作文太少,求大神加点点内容就行-

英语作文太少,求大神加点点内容就行-
it was the summer vacation this year, my whole family went to EMei mountain for travel.


we took long time by train to go to the Emei city. we had the lunch together after we arrived. then we go to the bus station to take a bus to the sight.


it was around 12pm when we arrived at the emei mountain sight. my father bought the ticket then we go though the automatic gate. I was shocked the mountain is so huge, trees and flowers are everwhere. I cannot wait to rush up the mountain, but my mother stopped me, said we are not supposed to rush because it will run not of energe soon, we should keep the energe during the entire travelling.


Then I kept my steps down to save my strangth. I saw lots of monkeys on the tree, some of them even jump in front of the people asked for food, how cut they are! during the tour, we also visited many temples, and I made a wish that my father and mother heathy for ever.


I was so grad that I had the opportunty to visit emei mountain and I'd like to go there for the second time when I grow up, It will be a totally different feeling.
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