英语改错题帮忙把这段英文错的改过来.Although I"m 16 years old,but my father st

I"m 16 years old,but my father still considers me as a careless child.He doesn't respect my opinion.He is very strict with me,and often punishes me for scattering everything in the house.However,he is doing the same all the time.I think he failed to set up a good example for me to follow,but he often says:"Do as i say,not as i do."Even worse,he always talks out my past mistakes with guests,which makes me feeling hurted.I love my father,but i can't bear such conducts he did.I have been tried many times to talk with him,but he never really listens to me.Please help me.
although和but只要用一个就行；treat是“对待”,我想你是想说他“还当你是个孩子”,应该用consider as,把…当作…；child的单复数就不说了；value是价值,和尊重完全没有关系；如果你是想说“把东西到处乱放”,这样写比较地道一点；下面几处,你的写法也不是完全不对,意思是表达了,只是不是很符合英语的表达方式；最后,Please,help me意思是“求求你,救命啊”,我想你是想说“请帮助我（解决这个问题/烦恼）”.