一篇英語改錯題..the dead sea is really a larger lake .the river jor

一篇英語改錯題..
the dead sea is really a larger lake .the river jordan flows into it .it's surface has an area of over a thousand square kilometres.because there is no outlet and the weather is very hot .the water is slowly flowing up.thewater in the sea has unpleasant smell and a very salty bitter taste .it is full with salt and other minerals.human bodies will not sink in it .people can sit up there and to read newspapers without sinking .but it is not a good place for swimming.so the water is bad for the skin .no alive things can live in it .that is why it called the dead sea.附上錯的知識點
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the dead sea都需要首字母大写 另外所有另起一个句子的首字母都要大写. larger改为large the river jordan 改为 The Jordan River it's改为its salty bitter之间加and with 改为of to删去 so改为because alive things最好改成living creature called前加is 建议重新写一遍 其实很多地方语法有点错误 但只这样该词还不够

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