l think an unforgettable activity for me is a travel to Fran
l think an unforgettable activity for me is a travel to France.有无语法错误?若有,请按原意改正
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没有严重错误,但是有可以改善的地方,因为一般不说a travel,如果说一次旅途,应该用a trip
而且一次难忘的经历一般用experience,用activity 怪怪的
l think an unforgettable experience for me is a trip to France.
如果非要用travel,可以写
l think an unforgettable experience for me is travelling to France.
另外,再吹毛求疵一点儿的话,前面的I think 也多余,会显得说话没有底气,可以去除
如果还有不懂问我哦~
而且一次难忘的经历一般用experience,用activity 怪怪的
l think an unforgettable experience for me is a trip to France.
如果非要用travel,可以写
l think an unforgettable experience for me is travelling to France.
另外,再吹毛求疵一点儿的话,前面的I think 也多余,会显得说话没有底气,可以去除
如果还有不懂问我哦~
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