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第二句多了个“the hardest so”,把它改成:"The donkey worked the hardest so the farmer fed it the most food." 下一句“sometime”改成sometimes,some time是某个时候的意思,可是这句子里的意思是由时候,sometimes是正确的意思.然后在“given much food”改成“given much more food”.“much food”本身是错的,语法上的错误,需加个more.“jealius”应该是jealous,你拼错了.“they began plotting”应该改成“he”.这里只有一只goat所以不能用they,they是指很多只羊.“I thought”改成"I think".“You carry such heavy thing from morning to night .Why don't you pretend to get sick but you can take a day off?"里的"thing"改成things,把句号改成逗号.前面那一句本身不是完整的句子,所以把前后两句联在一起会比较好.“thought it great idea”改成thought it was a great idea.idea是个名词,名词前加个"a".was是助动词,每个句子里都需要有助动词的."who said it was needed" 这里的was多余了.最后一句,虽然语法上没有说不能用so来开始一个句子,大部分的英语语文教授的人为用so来当开头不太恰当.能把so改成thus之类的词会适当些.thus有因此于是的意思.
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