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Here are few details of manager ZHAO’s letter
1.x05High school project
1)x05To establish sister schools.(US school will visit us on 9 June to 15 June,undertermined yet)
2)x05To establish the implement of credit system between the two schools.(We will provide teaching program of Taiyuan Foreign Language School)
3)x05The students will utilize the nights of weekend and weekday to study courses of US high school.
4)x05The students may get China and US high school diplomas when they graduate from school.
5)x05To enter the famous US,UK and Canada universities directly.
6)x05The students can select AP and ACT course as optional courses.
2.x05Cooperate with North Glasgow College
1)x05All the provision of this tripartite agreement can be executed except the application for ESOL authorized center.
2)x05According to the provision of the cooperation in running schools of this tripartite agreement,Shanxi University Business College hope to dispatch two teachers to North Glasgow College in September to study ESOL course for 2 month.We hope North Glasgow College could waive the fee for them.
3)x05After signing the cooperation agreement,Starting in September 2012,Shanxi University Business College may recruit international class students who enroll the program of 2+2+1 bachelor's and master's degree liaison.The students take subjects during the first two years,after completing two years study in North Glasgow,they could get the diploma of Shanxi University Business College and North Glasgow.If they continue to learn another year,they may get the master of UK.