八年级上册英语P52的2怎么写?

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Dear Gina,
I just came back from aquarium.It was the first time I went .My friends and I went to the aquarium .There we saw a shark,seals,octopus.We came across a singer .we also got his autograph.we still inside to go to a game,has won a prize.I bought a souvenir .when we are out aquarium,it started to rain.Luckily,I brought an umbrella.There really fun,if there's a chance to,I'll go.

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