帮我看看作文有什么不对Help the old woman One day,John was going to home
帮我看看作文有什么不对
Help the old woman
One day,John was going to home after school. On the way , a old woman was walking in front of him with some apples .But the appples fell and on the way, and the old woman didn't know. Jone put these apples quickly in a bag.Next,he returned them to the old woman. the old woman was impressed. She invited john to her house, and gave him apples, John refused her :''I don't eat.I'll go to home,good-bay!''
The old woman said :''Thank you very much, good wishes!''
Help the old woman
One day,John was going to home after school. On the way , a old woman was walking in front of him with some apples .But the appples fell and on the way, and the old woman didn't know. Jone put these apples quickly in a bag.Next,he returned them to the old woman. the old woman was impressed. She invited john to her house, and gave him apples, John refused her :''I don't eat.I'll go to home,good-bay!''
The old woman said :''Thank you very much, good wishes!''
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我修改了一下 One day,John was going home after school.On the way ,an old woman was walking in front of him with some apples in her hand.The appples fell to the ground,but the old woman didn't know.Jone pick up these apples quickly in a bag.Then he returned them to the old woman.The old woman was impressed by the kindness of the boy.She invited john to her house and gave him some apples .John refused her and said:It is what I am supposed to do.I have to go home now.Bye!'' The old woman said :''Thank you very much,One good turn deserves another.!''
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