请帮我改改这段英语,怎么贴不出来。郁闷掉了First of all,living alone can affect ac
请帮我改改这段英语,
怎么贴不出来。郁闷掉了
First of all,living alone can affect academic achievement.The reason is that if you live along,your parents won’t provide you financial sources.Moreover,the living costs are not a few.You must pay the rent,the tuition fees,the food,and more.So,you must work to feed yourself.We know,a majority of young adults are still in college or university,they need a lot of time for school work.If they have a part-time work,they’ll have less time to study.Even if we hear sometimes that some teenagers study and work well in the same time,but it isn’t possible for most of us.Furthermore,inasmuch they have to pay a variety of bills,they must keep in mind the deadlines of payment.Beside this,the young who live along is responsible to do all the housework,this need also a great deal of time.All these could reduce concentration on school work.
怎么贴不出来。郁闷掉了
First of all,living alone can affect academic achievement.The reason is that if you live along,your parents won’t provide you financial sources.Moreover,the living costs are not a few.You must pay the rent,the tuition fees,the food,and more.So,you must work to feed yourself.We know,a majority of young adults are still in college or university,they need a lot of time for school work.If they have a part-time work,they’ll have less time to study.Even if we hear sometimes that some teenagers study and work well in the same time,but it isn’t possible for most of us.Furthermore,inasmuch they have to pay a variety of bills,they must keep in mind the deadlines of payment.Beside this,the young who live along is responsible to do all the housework,this need also a great deal of time.All these could reduce concentration on school work.
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first of all,living alone can affect academic work.The reason being when you live by yourself,your parents will not support you financially.Moreover,the living costs can be enormous,such costs include rent,tuition,food and all the others.Therefore,you must work work in order to support yourself financially to afford those expenses.We know,the majority of young adults are still in college or university,requires a lot of time for school work.If they find a part-time job,they'll have less time to study.Although we hear some teenagers are able to manage work and school and be successful in both,it is not possible for most of us.
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