谁能帮我修改一下这篇作文呢?有很多语法错的,谢!
谁能帮我修改一下这篇作文呢?有很多语法错的,谢!
My Date
Today is Friday,July25,2008,is the day I wait for long time,and today is my third day to come here.Where my aunt s in..Because my mother think that I am too shy to get on well with other people.So she wants me to come to her sister’s company to have a try how to get on well with the people.At first,I was not agree to here,because I think I am too young and It’s not neccesary for me to know too much about the way to get on well with everyone.But through our talk between my mother and me,finally,I decided to carry on coming here.The reason is I don’t like to review the things that I learnt on senior one and I need to open my mind to talk with other people.The important reason I think of is this time my mark is very bad in our class,so I have no any reasons to refuse my mother’s demand.So I have kept on working for three day.And today is the third day.
I remember on the first day,my mother took me to my antie’s company and my antie took me to the third floor.When we came into the office,everyone was hard working and kept quite.So I walked quitely,too.We went near by a lady,”This is sster A.”My aunt said,.”Hello,sister A.”Then we went by next one.”This is brother B””Hello.”I said with a smile. The junior here for a few time who was graduated from …I forgot it. Then my aunt asked the junior to take care of me and went away. The junior is clear, he understood the reason my aunt asked him to take care of me is we all a student new here. And he is keen to taught me how to used photoshop,how to draw a picture about the building.On the first day,I only drew two pictures.On the way back home ,I told my mother that I don’t want to stay at the company tomorrow.Because I felt I have nothing to learn.The things I learnt is useless for me.I thought my mother will agree to me like used to be.But the words she said surprised me,”Noway!”Suddenly I felt my heart dropped into to the deep sea and my body has strong wind and heavy rain.”Why?!”I spoke loudly because I couldn’t control my self.”