I often dream of be a teacher
I often dream of be a teacher
I often dream of be a teacher. I dream of standing in the platform in the classroom and giving lessons to lovely boys and girls. I teach them, play with them, watch them growing up. I am always young when I was staying with them. I know there is not easy to be a teacher. Without enough knowledges, you can never teach good. Besides, you have to make friends with your pupils and take good care of him. Though I am a student now, but I will work very hard to make my dream comes true.
求答案解析，一定要说明为什么 谢谢
短文改错 求答案解析，一定要说明为什么 谢谢
I often dream of be a teacher. I dream of standing in the platform in the classroom and giving lessons to lovely boys and girls. I teach them, play with them, watch them growing up. I am always young when I was staying with them. I know there is not easy to be a teacher. Without enough knowledges, you can never teach good. Besides, you have to make friends with your pupils and take good care of him. Though I am a student now, but I will work very hard to make my dream comes true.
求答案解析，一定要说明为什么 谢谢
短文改错 求答案解析，一定要说明为什么 谢谢
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1. be改成being (或becoming)
2. in the platform这里把in改成on，站在讲台上(on)，不是里(in)
3. growing改成 grow
4. I was staying中的was改成am，时态错误
5. there is 要把there改成it
6. knowledges要去掉s，这是个不可数名词, knowledge
7. teach是动词，后面要把good改成well，用副词修饰动词
8. take good care of him，把him改成them，因为前面用的是pupils不可能只教一个学生
9. but I will work前面已经有though，这里的but要删掉就可以了
10. make my dream comes true这里把s去掉，改成come
2. in the platform这里把in改成on，站在讲台上(on)，不是里(in)
3. growing改成 grow
4. I was staying中的was改成am，时态错误
5. there is 要把there改成it
6. knowledges要去掉s，这是个不可数名词, knowledge
7. teach是动词，后面要把good改成well，用副词修饰动词
8. take good care of him，把him改成them，因为前面用的是pupils不可能只教一个学生
9. but I will work前面已经有though，这里的but要删掉就可以了
10. make my dream comes true这里把s去掉，改成come
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