英语翻译毕业设计的翻译，有些专业术语，英语高手帮我看看有没有语法错误：Cold rolled strip steel i

英语翻译
毕业设计的翻译，有些专业术语，英语高手帮我看看有没有语法错误：
Cold rolled strip steel is a steel product with a hot rolled strip as raw material，be rolled by cold rolling mill at room temperature .Cold rolled strip has advantages of smooth surface,high dimensional accuracy and excellent mechanical properties,most of the products will be rolled,and a large part of them will be processed into coated steel.Rolled cold-rolled sheet has high efficiency to produce,and easy to use,is conducive to subsequent processing.Therefore it is widely used,and has gradually replaced of the hot roll sheet with the same thickness.The output of cold rolled strip and sheet steel in the advanced industrial countries accounted for 30% of total output.