订正我的英语作文I want to live in Singapore.This is a beautiful coun

订正我的英语作文
I want to live in Singapore.This is a beautiful country.The people who live in there can speak Chinese or Japanese.If I live there,i think I will be happy because this is a peace city.there are many flowers or trees,so the air is very fresh.
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梦泽青云 1年前 已收到6个回答 举报
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hlqb 幼苗

共回答了22个问题采纳率：90.9% 举报

1.This is a beautiful country=>That/It is a beautiful country 你现在还不在那里吧,那就要用that,或者就用代词it
2.The people who live in there=>People who live there
3.There are many flowers and trees 肯定句用and
4.because it/that is a peaceful city it为代词,也可以用that,因为你现在还不在那里
5.a peaceful city 要用形容词peaceful

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kiliie 幼苗

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I want to live in Singapore. This is a beautiful country. The people who live there can speak Chinese or Japanese. If I live there, I think I will be happy because this is a peaceful city. There are m...

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正宗八舞 幼苗

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I want to live in Singapore.It is a beautiful country.The people who live in there can speak Chinese or Japanese.If I live there,I think I will be happy because it is a peaceful city.There are many flowers and trees,so the air is very fresh.

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微软中国 幼苗

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1."live in there"改为"live there","there"是个副词,不需要"in"
2."peace"改为"peaceful","peace"为名词,不能形容名词,"peaceful"为形容词,意思是和平的.

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atikasama 幼苗

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1 live in there 改为"live there","there"是个副词,不需要"in" 。
2 There are many flowers and trees or常用在选择疑问句中或否定句中
3 because it is a peaceful city it为代词
4 There are many flowers or trees ...

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小时了了 幼苗

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I want to live in Singapore as it is a beautiful country. The people there can speak English and either Chinese, Malay or Tamil. There are four main races in Singapore. They are Chinese, Malay, Indian...

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