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Currently Melbourne’s water storages sit at 31.8% of capacity.We will need some quick action plans if the populations in the Melbourne keep rising.From myself I’ve got 3 solutions to help Melbourne’s future water supply.
Water restrictions are the short term solution for Melbourne’s future water supply.Water restrictions are the short term solution is because it is depends on the amount of rainfall in Melbourne,if the amount of rainfall in Melbourne is dropping,and then there will be less rain we can restrict for our outdoor water use.But we can still restricting depends on the amount of rainfall.After all,there will be more water to use by the people in Melbourne.I think this solution will last about 10 years,by that time its 2019.
After the water restriction,increasing the price of water is another solution to Melbourne’s future water supply,except it’s a long term solution.It will make people more aware of water,such as wasting of water,because the price is increased and waste of water is like waste of money.This solution will have to last about 20 years,so after that,the desalination plants must be finished of build and there will be plenty of fresh drinking water for us.
Desalination plants are the best way for Melbourne’s future water supply.It is another way of using fresh water and more water will be access by the people in Melbourne.If we start building it right now,we will access to the fresh water earlier.To build desalination plant will take about 15-20 year,before that,we also have to make a project and send to architect to let the engineer make sure will the plant work or not,that will take about 3-4 years.Altogether,that will take about 30 years to build a desalination plant.
Those are the 3 solution for the Melbourne’s future water supply
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Currently Melbourne’s water storage sits at 31.8% of capacity.In order to improve the situation,we need to draw up some practical plans as the populations in the Melbourne keep rising.In my point of view,I’ve made three methods to solve the problem of the Melbourne’s future water supply.
First and foremost,we can carry out water restriction as the short term solution for Melbourne’s future water supply.That’s because most of water in Melbourne comes from the rainfall.In other words,if the amount of rainfall in Melbourne is dropping,there will be less rain we can restrict for our outdoor water use.But we can still restricting depends on the amount of rainfall.After all,there will be more water to use by the people in Melbourne.In my opinion,this solution will last at lest 10 years until 2019.(觉得这里思路有点不清楚)
Second,in the long term,increasing the price of water is another solution for Melbourne’s future water supply.For the water’s price increasing,it will attract most people’s attention on the water problem especially the waste of water.This solution will have to last about 20 years,so after that,the desalination plants must be finished of build and there will be plenty of fresh drinking water for us.
Last but not the least,desalination plants is the best way for Melbourne’s future water supply.It is another way of using fresh water.If realized,more water will be access by the people in Melbourne.The earlier we start building it,the more water we will acquire.Building desalination plant will take about 15-20 years,before it comes true,we also need to make a project that the engineers make sure the plant will work in 3-4 years.All in all,it will take about 30 years to build a desalination plant.
To sum up,those are the three ways to solve the problem of the water supply in Melbourne.

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