亲好心人帮我看看此篇作文是否有问题,包括时态,还有语法
亲好心人帮我看看此篇作文是否有问题,包括时态,还有语法
My Hobby
I have many hobbies. Such as listen to music. play basketball and read books
In my spare time, I like listening to some music, It can make me relax and let me forget my unhappy moment. sometimes I like read some book .the history books is my favorite, which I think is beneficial to my study At the same time, I also like the Internet Through the Internet I can get some useful information and chat with my friends as well. The Internet has shortened our distance.
My Hobby
I have many hobbies. Such as listen to music. play basketball and read books
In my spare time, I like listening to some music, It can make me relax and let me forget my unhappy moment. sometimes I like read some book .the history books is my favorite, which I think is beneficial to my study At the same time, I also like the Internet Through the Internet I can get some useful information and chat with my friends as well. The Internet has shortened our distance.
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My Hobby
I have many hobbies.Such as listen to music,play basketball and read books.
In my spare time,I like listening to some music because It helps me feel relaxing and helps me forget about the unhappy things in life.sometimes I like read some book.History books is my favorite,which I think is also beneficial towards my study,I also like to surf the Internet,through Internet I can get some useful information and chat with my friends.The Internet has kept us close.我有些改的地方不是因为的写的不好,而是我觉得别的词可能更恰当,仅供参考 :)
I have many hobbies.Such as listen to music,play basketball and read books.
In my spare time,I like listening to some music because It helps me feel relaxing and helps me forget about the unhappy things in life.sometimes I like read some book.History books is my favorite,which I think is also beneficial towards my study,I also like to surf the Internet,through Internet I can get some useful information and chat with my friends.The Internet has kept us close.我有些改的地方不是因为的写的不好,而是我觉得别的词可能更恰当,仅供参考 :)
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