英语写作Knowing Something About Western CultureWith the developm
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Knowing Something About Western Culture
With the development of the technology and economics,more and more communications are being made between the eastern culture and the western culture.And it is known to all that western culture has a great influence on the world.As a talent in the 21 century,one must have some knowledge about western culture.
The reasons are as follows.Firstly,now the development of the west is still in the head of the world.And west culture has its own fascination and advantages.Secondly,it is especially important for Chinese talents to know something about west culture.Because China’s development can not be separated from that of the world,just as DengXiaoping said twenty years ago,and China is also playing an important role in the world in recent years.As China is a traditional eastern country,if we are willing to develop faster,we must have a knowledge about western culture and learn useful things from it,then compete with it and develop with it.If we don’t ,think of the QingDynesty,when we know nothing about the west,and when we are bullied by the west.
But how can we achieve it?Take the west history for example.We can read books about it;we can see movies about it; we can search information about it on the internet,and we can even observe and study in western countries.There exist many ways to get a knowledge of the western culture,as long as you have passion and a thirst for knowledge.
In a word,it make sense to know something about western culture,of course the good aspect.Only after the talents broaden their horizons can they make a bigger contribution to society.
Knowing Something About Western Culture
With the development of the technology and economics,more and more communications are being made between the eastern culture and the western culture.And it is known to all that western culture has a great influence on the world.As a talent in the 21 century,one must have some knowledge about western culture.
The reasons are as follows.Firstly,now the development of the west is still in the head of the world.And west culture has its own fascination and advantages.Secondly,it is especially important for Chinese talents to know something about west culture.Because China’s development can not be separated from that of the world,just as DengXiaoping said twenty years ago,and China is also playing an important role in the world in recent years.As China is a traditional eastern country,if we are willing to develop faster,we must have a knowledge about western culture and learn useful things from it,then compete with it and develop with it.If we don’t ,think of the QingDynesty,when we know nothing about the west,and when we are bullied by the west.
But how can we achieve it?Take the west history for example.We can read books about it;we can see movies about it; we can search information about it on the internet,and we can even observe and study in western countries.There exist many ways to get a knowledge of the western culture,as long as you have passion and a thirst for knowledge.
In a word,it make sense to know something about western culture,of course the good aspect.Only after the talents broaden their horizons can they make a bigger contribution to society.
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Nessary To Know Something Of Western Culture
With the development in technology and economy,communications between eastern culture and western culture, as a crucial part of the interrelations, are being accelerated in ,at the same time, width and depth progressively. And it is universally known that western culture has great influence on our world. To be a person of talents in 21st century, one should acquire certain knowledge of western culture.
The leading relevent factor to concern about is that, currently ,the development of west is still in the head of that of world. And western culture has its own fascination and advantages. Then, it is especially important for Chinese talents to know something about western culture, since China's development can not be isolated from that of the world,just as DengXiaoping said twenty years ago, and China is also playing an key part in the world recently for tens of years. China is a traditional eastern country, if we are willing to develop ourself faster, we must abtain a knowledge about western culture and extract useful elements from it,and then compete by it and develop with it. If we don't , think of the Qing Dynesty, when we know nothing about the west, and when we are bullied by the west, we know what to do.
But how can we achieve this? Take the western history as an example.We shall read books about it;we shall watch movies about it; we shall search information about it on the internet,and we can even observe and study in western countries. There exist many ways to get a knowledge of the western culture, as long as on have passion and a thirst for knowledge.
To make a conclusion, it makes sense to attain some information about western culture,especially the beneficial aspects.Only after the talents broaden their horizons can they make a bigger contribution to our own society.
(中式思维,中式句型,逻辑性较差,前后矛盾,只是说理,论证无力.索性语流还算顺畅,也看得出尝试选用了一些地道的表达法和词汇,希望你继续努力）
P.S：其实应该大改,就像第一段那样,但就不是你写的啦,另外还希望你充实一些论点,实际上你通篇只有一个观点,车轱辘话说来说去,没啥子趣味.还有些小毛病需要注意,比如单复数,序数法之类.
整篇文章大约大学四级写作及格线附近水平.
With the development in technology and economy,communications between eastern culture and western culture, as a crucial part of the interrelations, are being accelerated in ,at the same time, width and depth progressively. And it is universally known that western culture has great influence on our world. To be a person of talents in 21st century, one should acquire certain knowledge of western culture.
The leading relevent factor to concern about is that, currently ,the development of west is still in the head of that of world. And western culture has its own fascination and advantages. Then, it is especially important for Chinese talents to know something about western culture, since China's development can not be isolated from that of the world,just as DengXiaoping said twenty years ago, and China is also playing an key part in the world recently for tens of years. China is a traditional eastern country, if we are willing to develop ourself faster, we must abtain a knowledge about western culture and extract useful elements from it,and then compete by it and develop with it. If we don't , think of the Qing Dynesty, when we know nothing about the west, and when we are bullied by the west, we know what to do.
But how can we achieve this? Take the western history as an example.We shall read books about it;we shall watch movies about it; we shall search information about it on the internet,and we can even observe and study in western countries. There exist many ways to get a knowledge of the western culture, as long as on have passion and a thirst for knowledge.
To make a conclusion, it makes sense to attain some information about western culture,especially the beneficial aspects.Only after the talents broaden their horizons can they make a bigger contribution to our own society.
(中式思维,中式句型,逻辑性较差,前后矛盾,只是说理,论证无力.索性语流还算顺畅,也看得出尝试选用了一些地道的表达法和词汇,希望你继续努力）
P.S：其实应该大改,就像第一段那样,但就不是你写的啦,另外还希望你充实一些论点,实际上你通篇只有一个观点,车轱辘话说来说去,没啥子趣味.还有些小毛病需要注意,比如单复数,序数法之类.
整篇文章大约大学四级写作及格线附近水平.
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