托福作文求批改.同不同意-----Your job has more effect on your happiness

托福作文求批改.同不同意-----Your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life?
Happiness is a feeling that can comfort everyone.Some people get happiness from their job,and others get it in their social life.I think it is our jobs that has more effect on our happiness than our social life.
First and foremost,most people regard the succeed in their job as the most happiness thing in their life.Many successful people are occupied with their business,some of them even do not have social life.Do they get happiness?Of course they do.Because what makes them feel happiness is that their business can become good.My father is a salesman,everyday he attaches his attention to how can he sell more clothes.I remember last year he sold ten thousand piece of clothes,and he was so happy.Even though he was so tired last year,as he did not have social life ,he still felt happiness.Because he succeed in his career.
In addition,we spend most of the time in our job.We have to work from Monday to Friday.We do not have much time to enjoy our social life.So most of us will get the happiness when we are working.Both our co-workers and our bosses will bring us happiness.I want to take myself as an example.I am a strange girl that I really want to spend all of my time in my office,as a result that my co-workers are so fun that they always make me laugh.Everyday they sing songs and tell jokes in the office when we do not have much work to do.It makes me feel that we are in a big family.
Admittedly,social life is essential in our daily life.When we go hiking or shopping with friends,we will feel so happy.However,our job has more effect as a result that it brings us satisfaction and we spend most of our time on it,which makes us feel more happiness than our social life.