高中英语改错The summer holiday,when I'm looking forward to,is comi
高中英语改错
The summer holiday,when I'm looking forward to,is coming.What a fun it isto go swimming!Playing football is one of my hobby.I can ride my bicycle,climb highmountains or go fishing.Sometime I can play chess with my grandfather.Howinterested my holiday will be!But my father is always afraid I would be hurt by a truck,fall into water,fell off a tree or something.He is afraid I would fright against others or be taken by bad people.And if I'm careful and politely enough,how will these things happen?I must try my best to persuade my father.
The summer holiday,when I'm looking forward to,is coming.What a fun it isto go swimming!Playing football is one of my hobby.I can ride my bicycle,climb highmountains or go fishing.Sometime I can play chess with my grandfather.Howinterested my holiday will be!But my father is always afraid I would be hurt by a truck,fall into water,fell off a tree or something.He is afraid I would fright against others or be taken by bad people.And if I'm careful and politely enough,how will these things happen?I must try my best to persuade my father.
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And改为But
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hobby改为hobbies
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sometime改为sometimes
interested改为interesting
fell改为fall
something后加else
And改为But
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