帮忙看一下这篇英文短文有什么错误的地方
帮忙看一下这篇英文短文有什么错误的地方
Dear Rode,
First,invite them more to take part in some meeting and activities,which can make their English a great progress and help them get away from solitude.And it also can help you know more about Chinese culture and get more knowledge of Chinese.
Second,help them more with their study,which can not only help them improve their study and ger good grades but also make them think you are friendly and speak highly of you.
Third,don't laugh at them when they make some mistakes.If you laugh at them,they will annoy with you.
If you do all that I advise,you'll get along well with them.
All right,that's all.I hope you can write me soon.
Yours
XXX
Dear Rode,
First,invite them more to take part in some meeting and activities,which can make their English a great progress and help them get away from solitude.And it also can help you know more about Chinese culture and get more knowledge of Chinese.
Second,help them more with their study,which can not only help them improve their study and ger good grades but also make them think you are friendly and speak highly of you.
Third,don't laugh at them when they make some mistakes.If you laugh at them,they will annoy with you.
If you do all that I advise,you'll get along well with them.
All right,that's all.I hope you can write me soon.
Yours
XXX
赞 qinqindiudiu 幼苗
共回答了19个问题采纳率：78.9% 举报
第一行make their Eglish have a great progress think you are friendly不合习惯,应该用feel比较合适,最后一句期待别人回信这样说比较好：I am looking forward to your reply!
1年前 追问
3
second 后面那一句删了，然后which改成it ger是什么应该是get吧 打错了吧
可能相似的问题
-
1年前1个回答
-
1年前2个回答
-
1年前2个回答
-
1年前3个回答
-
1年前2个回答
-
1年前1个回答
-
1年前2个回答
-
1年前3个回答
-
1年前1个回答
-
1年前1个回答
-
1年前3个回答
-
1年前4个回答
你能帮帮他们吗