求帮忙做一题英语改错题这是一份糟糕的办公E-mail,请找出Email中所有的错误并列出来,然后以Jack的身份写一份更
求帮忙做一题英语改错题
这是一份糟糕的办公E-mail,请找出Email中所有的错误并列出来,然后以Jack的身份写一份更好的E-mail对这个同学进行回复.
帮把错误列出来,然后修改后的贴上来就好了,
Hi Jack!
My name’s Jaana and I’M FROM FINLAND!I bet you haven’t had students
from here B4 ;-) ;-) That’s probably coz we’re so amazing at languages,that
we don’t need any xtra help?except me – I need all the help I can get!FYI:
the problem really started when I was in primary school,and my parents,who
had been arguing non-stop since I was a little baby,got divorced and decided
that I should be adopted as they couldn’t decide who should have custody of
me.If I had been in their situation,I think I probably wouldn’t have known
either!Anyway,this was all a bit traumatic,so all my school subjects
suffered,especially English.HAHAHAAA ONLY JOKING!:-) (Actually,
don’t tell anyone,but I’m actually quite a good student?but if anyone found
out,my reputation would be ruined,so shhhhhh!) BTW do u do courses for
uni students?How many lessons/week?Is there any extra stuff after school,
SO I CAN MEET SOME COOL PEOPLE?How about trips?Give me all the
info you can,man.
Jaana (although all my mates call me Jakki!)
这是一份糟糕的办公E-mail,请找出Email中所有的错误并列出来,然后以Jack的身份写一份更好的E-mail对这个同学进行回复.
帮把错误列出来,然后修改后的贴上来就好了,
Hi Jack!
My name’s Jaana and I’M FROM FINLAND!I bet you haven’t had students
from here B4 ;-) ;-) That’s probably coz we’re so amazing at languages,that
we don’t need any xtra help?except me – I need all the help I can get!FYI:
the problem really started when I was in primary school,and my parents,who
had been arguing non-stop since I was a little baby,got divorced and decided
that I should be adopted as they couldn’t decide who should have custody of
me.If I had been in their situation,I think I probably wouldn’t have known
either!Anyway,this was all a bit traumatic,so all my school subjects
suffered,especially English.HAHAHAAA ONLY JOKING!:-) (Actually,
don’t tell anyone,but I’m actually quite a good student?but if anyone found
out,my reputation would be ruined,so shhhhhh!) BTW do u do courses for
uni students?How many lessons/week?Is there any extra stuff after school,
SO I CAN MEET SOME COOL PEOPLE?How about trips?Give me all the
info you can,man.
Jaana (although all my mates call me Jakki!)
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e-mail 并无大错,而只不过是用了一些新式简字,现把它们列在下面:
B4 = before
coz = because
xtra = extra
FYI = for your information
BTW = by the way
do u = do you
uni = university
info = information
man = my friend
下面是给Jaana的回复:
Hi Jaana,
I got your e-mail,you wrote it rather well.Although there were plenty of modern new texts,I understood every word you said,and I am so sorry to hear about your unfortunate childhood.Also I am very happy for you that you had learned your English so well,but I promise that I won't tell anyone about it (let them guess).Yes we do courses for university students XX lessons per week.We also have many after school activities as well,and guarantee that you will never get bored at all.Plenty of interesting people here for you to meet too.We have regular school trips every month.I shall send you more information separately later in the week.I really do hope you will decide to come to join us soon.Meanwhile please keep in touch.
Jack
B4 = before
coz = because
xtra = extra
FYI = for your information
BTW = by the way
do u = do you
uni = university
info = information
man = my friend
下面是给Jaana的回复:
Hi Jaana,
I got your e-mail,you wrote it rather well.Although there were plenty of modern new texts,I understood every word you said,and I am so sorry to hear about your unfortunate childhood.Also I am very happy for you that you had learned your English so well,but I promise that I won't tell anyone about it (let them guess).Yes we do courses for university students XX lessons per week.We also have many after school activities as well,and guarantee that you will never get bored at all.Plenty of interesting people here for you to meet too.We have regular school trips every month.I shall send you more information separately later in the week.I really do hope you will decide to come to join us soon.Meanwhile please keep in touch.
Jack
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